My brochure is a trifold and full-color piece. The content
of the brochure about The Notorious MSG is pretty vague and hard to tell if
they are promoting health or if they are trying to teach you ghetto assault training.
Either way, they should have had a more clear direction and a less confusing
design. Your eyes don’t know where to look when you first see the brochure, and
their type and layout are so sporadic that you can’t tell what to read and at
what objecting you’re supposed to be looking. They need to have a more direct
line of information, instead of trying to promote more than one thing at a time
on one small piece of paper.
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